DnA 5154 Posted April 20, 2002 Please leave your questions, comments, etc. for Jon Demrick's awesome OFP Diaries here Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sheriff 0 Posted April 20, 2002 Brilliant, I'm speechless. I could picture it all The Pain, Suffering and Fear, The total Agony. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RedStorm 0 Posted April 20, 2002 ...One..word... w00t!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antichrist 0 Posted April 20, 2002 Its pretty good But I reckon the best one i read was written by a guy from our site It was a story about a russian sniper.... he never finished it though And its in russian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Placebo 29 Posted April 20, 2002 Absolutely superb writing, very very moving Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Satchel 0 Posted April 20, 2002 Good writing, hand that man a cigar! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RedStorm 0 Posted April 20, 2002 What if he doesn't smoke? Oh, and now that you're here, what about your w00t Apache? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sheriff 0 Posted April 20, 2002 Fear my Apache Web server. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Postduifje 0 Posted April 22, 2002 This is some good stuff, can't wait for more! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shadow 6 Posted April 23, 2002 Outstanding writing. Looking forward to more Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Espectro (DayZ) 0 Posted April 23, 2002 Its good writing indeed.... just a bit short :/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DnA 5154 Posted April 23, 2002 Jon will add new installments very frequently. Chapter 2 has been posted now for example </span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Also, from chapter 3 on, Jon will involve several of the missions he found in the database in his writing. He will also include the names of the missions he used so you, as reader, can re-live the whole experience.<span id='postcolor'> Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Espectro (DayZ) 0 Posted April 23, 2002 Thx alot... i guess i missed that part Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ex-RoNiN 0 Posted April 23, 2002 Although I like the style of his writing, I am not so sure about the content: -Since when does the Czech Republic feature islands its pretty much in the middle of europe....the sea is thousands of miles away... -Why is it "former eastern block countries" ? I thought this was 1985 Its not bad, but it didn't pass my detail-nitpicking Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_4_20creeper 0 Posted April 24, 2002 Hello everyone! First off, thanks to everyone for taking the time to begin reading my little saga, and secondly, for actually posting something in regards to it. Â I wanted to address the concerns of ex-ronin. Â Ex, before I embarked on this project, I felt there would be certain elements of the OFP community who would demand 'reality'. Â That being said, I had DnA take a list of questions I had drawn up to the game designers themselves. Â I wanted to know where they envisioned the game taking place. Â Well, guess what? Â My answer was just like I stated, the Czech Republic. Â My feelings were that it was their game, therefore, Â their geographic location. Â It's odd, I know, but you haven't learned all there is to learn. Â Maybe there's a reason you don't know about such an island chain and it's existence in the Czech Republic. Â As for the reference to the splintering of the Eastern Bloc, well if we've got islands in the Czech Republic, we can have an early splintering of the Eastern Block. Â Afterall, this is a fictional saga based on a fantastic game that is based on fictional events to begin with. Â I figured there would be some 'hard corps' amongst us, which I love, so I have many other 'surprises' direct from the creators, to unleash on you. Thanks to everyone for reading and I'd like to especially thank Dna and Shadow for the opportunity, as well as, Storm and Sheriff for their support and Sith and Vegas for being Sith and Vegas. Â Take it easy until next time. 'There's something creepy going on here, eh Scooby?' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ex-RoNiN 0 Posted April 24, 2002 LOL! Your post made me laugh : realistic combat in a fictional environment! Sounds a bit daft, but if u think about it for a second then i guess its true... Ok then, I like the idea I think, keep 'em coming Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FreddyDeeJr 0 Posted May 7, 2002 Sounds like a 'Made-or-TV Movie'...that i might not watch. In today's world, (even the OFP world), truth is much more interesting then fiction. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EBass 0 Posted May 7, 2002 Woaah good stuff, kinda like SPR though I appreciate the chewy stuff in the middle I cant wait for the combat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shadow 6 Posted May 8, 2002 The real action will start in chapter 3. Trust me; you'll love it !!! Â -I know I will.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
advocatexxx 0 Posted May 8, 2002 Sadly, part II is an utter disappointment. The author insufficiently builds character development and the dialogue suffers from unrealistic touches. If there is a climax to this story, I most certainly haven't found it. It fails to propertly declare the final setting and portrays the President as Oprah Winfrey. Most importantly, he lost the momentum he so perfectly gained in Chapter 1. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
marshmanguy 0 Posted August 7, 2002 I dont understand wat these are Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WhoCares 0 Posted August 7, 2002 No need to bump stoneage threads... *closed* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
