[SP Mission] Takistan Storys One

[Anwender 16]

 

TAKISTAN STORYS ONE

 

 

 

 

Features

-Infantry Combat

-Radio Chatter / Voice acting

-Unique customized Loadout

-Support via radio

-Helicopter insertion and extraction

-Arma 3 music

-Action!

 

Required addons

RHS:Escalation

All in Arma Terrainpack (AiA TP)

 

Optional addons(recommended)

ASR AI 3

LAxemann´s Dynasounds

 

Description

Takistan Storys One is the first mission of many. This one is about an IED cache that has to be destroyed, but it is heavily guarded

by bad guys. You have a preset loadout aswell as your teammates so you have limited resources to complete your mission.

If you want you can call support (UH-60 Helicopter with 2 6.5mm Miniguns) that helps you. But if he gets destroyed you wont

have another one.

 

 

Known issues

-RHS:Escalation is replacing shemags with helmets and boonies for a reason i dont really know.

 

 

How to play

Download the .rar and extract it with (Winrar/7zip).

Locate your Arma 3 installation and find the Mission folder.

Put the .pbo from the .rar into the Mission folder

Start Arma 3

 

Download

Google Drive Mirror 1.14

Armaholic Mirror 1.14

(if the download is not working please contact me so i can fix it)

 

 

Changelog:

v1.14
Added:
- Overview image
- Onscreen INFO-text text(BIS_func)
- Radio chatter
- Full briefing
- donekey_anw
- Helicopter extraction
- ID´s for all units
- New trigger depencies
- Signal smoke on all LZ´s

Changed:
- Bravo insertion point replaced to prevent crash with wires
- Evac replaced (shorter distance)

Deleted:
- Useless BTR

Fixed:
- Description.ext
- Briefing
- Trigger depencies (firing on point)
- Readme
- Minor tweaks and fixes


v1.2 release 11/25/2015
-changed loadout of enemy units
-little "bug" fixes

v1.1 release 11/24/2015
-added description.ext
-added previewimage on loadingscreen
-grouped some enemy units for better communication between ai´s
-added situation report
-replaced landing site
-removed mediafire link

v1.0 release 11/23/2015
-release

 

Pictures

 

 

 

 

Thanks to:

-Armaholic hosting my mission and keeping it up to date on their website

-McLupo for really helping me with this mission

-All the people who take time to play this mission

-Bohemia Interactive for Arma 3  :)

[McLupo 118]

Hi,

congrats on the release - but...

...please choose an other mirror (Dropbox/Google drive etc.) for providing the file, or check it, because my browser refused the download, because of the security settings. (Verification failed/Not safe)  ;)

 

Greetings

McLupo

 

[Anwender 16]

Hi,

congrats on the release - but...

...please choose an other mirror (Dropbox/Google drive etc.) for providing the file, or check it, because my browser refused the download, because of the security settings. (Verification failed/Not safe)  ;)

 

Greetings

McLupo

Hi,

Thanks for your reply. I added Google Drive for now but for me mediafire is working fine

i dont know why your browser is refusing to download it.

 

Greetings

anwender

[McLupo 118]

Hi mate,

 

thanks for adding the new link, but...access denied...; please share the file... ;)

 

Greetings

McLupo

[Anwender 16]

Hi,

...again, i didnt really know how to use google drive so i just rushed it.

I hope it works now and thanks again for replying.

 

Greetings

anwender

[grillob3 11]

Nice quick mission! Keep them coming!

[McLupo 118]

Hi Anwender,

 

at first let me thank you for your effort and hard work.  :) 
I guess it is a beginner mission and for that the technical ascpect is very good.

 

...but are far too short, to allow some tactical manoeuvre.  ;) 

 

All in all I did it in 10 minutes...?! (Veteran mode)

 

..., but it was fun and that the main thing, I guess!

 

I don't allow myself any criticism, but I want to point out what is, let me say, uncomfortable.
Please take it as an advice and/or help.  ;)

 

In detail:

Pro:
A functioning beginner mission.
All inserted elements working fine, til to the end.
Takistan a nice place for a battle.

 

Contra:
You called it "Takistan Story", but  you're not telling a story. It is really a pity.
No intro, lack of overview, picture and name of the author... and no impressive atmosphere.
Why presents an IED an immediate danger in this area? No convoy is on the way and no patrol is planned.
The insertion on a hill, exposed to every one, is not a good idea.
Otherwise the highground position was my key - all bad elements could be killed from this point, but boring.
Most of the enemies are not grouped and working not as a team.
What is the reason to implement the great RHS mod if you didn´t use the potential of that awesome mod?

 

Take this mission as a basic to build up a propper mission, without missing anything.  :)

 

Thanks again and keep it up.  :)

 

Greetings
McLupo

[Anwender 16]

Hi,

First off all...Thank you for playing and taking the time to write a review on my mission!

The mission is all about action and the name "Takistan storys" is just because i couldnt find a good one  :D

i may add some sort of Story in later missions, but im not really good at writing storys.

I worked on the Mission today (see changelog above). I basically added some things

that you mentioned in your review.

 

Greetings

anwender

[McLupo 118]

Hi Anwender,

 

you´re welcome.  :)

 

Sounds good. Many thanks for your efforts.
I am excited about your changes and the progress.
Download is done and I shall then give you a full feedback as soon as I can.

 

Finding and writing a comprehensible story is not a big deal, if you would like me to help you to do so, please let me know.  ;) 

 

Greetings

McLupo

 

PS:

One last point: Take your time, do it step by step and don´t overdo it and your mission will become  a good one.  :) 

[Anwender 16]

Hi,

glad to see that you are really caring about my mission and again thanks for taking the time to help me.

 

I just noticed that i was using an old version of RHS:Escalation.

The new version has AKM´s and PKM´s!

So basically weapons that fit even better into my scenario! Tomorrow i will start changing every loadout

to make it more realistic, because the enemys that i call "takiban"  :D  should have old equipment

and not the clean Ak´s that look like they got delivered from russian factorys a few days ago.

 

Greetings

anwender

[McLupo 118]

Hi Anwender,

 

please check your recently uploaded file.
The file extension is incorrect. (Missing:  .Takistan)
Not a major problem for me, but for novice users.  :icon_wink:

Thanks.

 

Greetings
McLupo

[Anwender 16]

Hi,

i fixed the download but i also changed the loadout of the enemys but now the shemags are replaced with

russian boonies and even helmets?!

 

Greetings

anwender

[McLupo 118]

Hi mate,

 

thanks for fixing the thing. 

 

Sorry for the delay for giving some feedback, but aside I'm working on some new stuff.  :)

I have played the mission and I noticed the changes you have made.
But I got some issues:
1. The sniper calls for ammo, did you change the load?
2, Furthermore I got an advice of an issue about the sniper rifle from the RHS mod (M107).
3. The battle is not well balanced, because both teams are understaffed (a second machine gunner to suppress the enemy and a medic are essential)
4. The heli support is needless - because of too much power
5. The "donekey" activation is missing (did it in my version)
6. EVAC much too far, cause it makes no sence, because no heli is waiting...and only to reach the End Trigger...?

 

Aside that I work on a stringtable and some stuff around the story - Informations, Intel, ROE, further explanations and so on, hope you will like it?!

 

It´s a good mission and it is fun and the changes you made have an effect.  :)

 

Keep it up.

 

Greetings

McLupo

[Anwender 16]

Hi Community,

today i released the next version of my mission!

Basically whats new in this one:

v1.14
Added:
- Overview image
- Onscreen INFO-text text(BIS_func)
- Radio chatter
- Full briefing
- donekey_anw
- Helicopter extraction
- ID´s for all units
- New trigger depencies
- Signal smoke on all LZ´s

Changed:
- Bravo insertion point replaced to prevent crash with wires
- Evac replaced (shorter distance)

Deleted:
- Useless BTR

Fixed:
- Description.ext
- Briefing
- Trigger depencies (firing on point)
- Readme
- Minor tweaks and fixes

And again thanks to McLupo...he is also the one who made up a short story that explains why you have to destroy those mean explosives ;)

and he added the Voice acting/Radio Chatter.

 

Check this one out guys i think its great :D

 

greetings

anwender

[McLupo 118]

Hi Anwender,

 

no, no, it´s your "story" mate and I have realized that you have made constant progress.

Thanks that I was allowed to help.  :)

 

Greetings

McLupo

[spotter001 82]

i guess it's finally time to try this mission-thanks for sharing.

[Anwender 16]

i guess it's finally time to try this mission-thanks for sharing.

Hi,

thanks for playing! 

If you have the time please give me a short review on the mission.

 

Greetings

anwender

[spotter001 82]

It's a good mission, had some good firefight out there. I like the mods, briefing was good and informative enough. Sadly i couldn't finish it, my ACE doesn't work properly somehow and i can't place explosives to destroy that ammo cache. But this has nothing to do with the mission-it's a problem on my part.

Voice acting is always nice to have and i see you put effort into this mission. I managed to score some really good hits with that m4, past 400m.

 

Hope you'll make more missions.

[Anwender 16]

Hi,

There will be more missions, i am allready working on the second part  :)

 

Greetings

anwender

[spotter001 82]

Great to hear that! :)

[McLupo 118]

Hi Anwender,

 

please do not forget to inform Foxhound (Armaholic) about the update, because the current version 1.2 is outdated
and there's no chance of anyone gaining access to your new version.
The mirror provides you with an opportunity to getting much more valuable feedback.  ;)

 

Greetings

McLupo

[Anwender 16]

Hi,

Armaholic Mirror has been updated  :)

Also part 2 is now being made with much more story.

 

Greetings

Anwender