texkaz 33 Posted August 6, 2012 English Announcement: Operation Sturm 444 "Kill Kenny!" Hi and thanks for showing interest in my Mission. You are the commander of a GRU Spetsnaz Unit who is sent on a raid into Zargabad to go kill the President of Takistan who is no longer under the protection of his American masters. This is to resemble Operation Sturm-333 when Soviet Spetsnaz forces assassinated President Hafizullah Amin of Afghanistan back in 1979-effectively beginning that country's war which people are still fighting today. This mission is also a preview (more a call for help) for my [WIP] Campaign War and Peacekeepers. Here is who I need: Testers- to test missions Translators- Although I speak good Russian for a foreigner I still am a foreigner. Translations should not be too hard since it will be basically correcting grammatically what I write down in Russian language. Voice Actors- Anyone-I NEED Russians and I want Dari/Farsi speakers. ÐžÐ¿ÐµÑ€Ð°Ñ†Ð¸Ñ Ð¡Ñ‚ÑƒÑ€Ð¼ 444: "Убить Кенни!" РаÑпад военной ÑкономичеÑкой Ñель СШРв Зеленой ÐœÐ¾Ñ€Ñ Ñоздал неÑтабильноÑÑ‚ÑŒ на границей РоÑÑии. Президент ТакиÑтана был уÑтановлен СШРа иÑпользует противроÑÑийÑкую политику. Он даёт оружиÑ, денги, и мужчине бандитам на Юг РоÑÑии и другие Ñтраны Средней Ðзии чтобы оÑновать новый Ñмират. Ваша цель- Убить нового президента ТакиÑтана Тарик Ðль Кенни Ñо Ñмелым набег на Заргабад! *Ðто проÑмотра будущей кампании Ñ ÑÐµÐ¹Ñ‡Ð°Ñ Ñоздаю, но мне нужна помощь!* ТребуетÑÑ: Переводчик: англ. ---> руÑ. Я Ðмериканец и Ñ…Ð¾Ñ‚Ñ Ð¼Ð¾Ð³Ñƒ пиÑать на руÑÑком Ñзыке, Ñ Ð½Ðµ вÑегда пишу аккуратно…и хочу ÐºÐ°Ð¼Ð¿Ð°Ð½Ð¸Ñ Ð±Ñ‹Ñ‚ÑŒ профеÑÑионально и без Ñерьёзной грамматичеÑкой ошибок. Из за факта что пишу по-руÑÑки ваша цель корректировать менÑ. Ðктёры (РуÑÑкий и ФарÑи или Дари Ñзык) 1-5 человека играют другие роли. ÐкÑперт Ñценарий. Инто и Оутро и.Ñ‚.д. Mission: http://narod.ru/disk....7z.html http://www.gamefront.com/files/22087525/OperationSturm444.Zargabad.7z Addons/ADDONI GRU Spetsnaz by Stagler http://forums.bistudio.com/showthread.php?128309-Stagler-s-Spetsnaz-GRU IL-76 by SARMAT Studios http://www.armaholic.com/page.php?id=10747 Takistani National Army by Clavicula_nox4817 http://www.armaholic.com/page.ph....%2BARMY Dynamic Shouts by SARMAT Studios http://www.armaholic.com/page.php?id=10584&highlight=DYNAMIC%2BSHOUTS RH AK Pack by RobertHammer http://www.armaholic.com/page.php?id=9029 Russian Mechanized Infantry in Desert Camo by SlayerRF. http://www.armaholic.com/page.php?id=11992&highlight=RUSSIAN%2BMECHANIZED%2BINFANTRY%2BODKB Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kommiekat 12 Posted August 6, 2012 Hi, for what ever reason, cannot download Takistani National Army Takistani National Army by Clavicula_nox4817 http://www.armaholic.com/page.ph....%2BARMY Don't know why. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
texkaz 33 Posted August 6, 2012 (edited) Me neither. It worked a short time ago when I re downloaded them. I am gonna dig out the files and see if I cant re-host it. Edit: 10 secs after my post TNA was available for download again and then not again. Error says armaholic's server is overloaded and your should try later. Edited August 6, 2012 by TexKaz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kommiekat 12 Posted August 8, 2012 OK, finally downloaded TNS. Played the mission and enjoyed most of it, except the last stage. Was nice to play with different mods for a change. Liked Staglers units the best. START was fun with instant action. MIDDLE game was fun as well. Ending?? A bit cliche with the drug lord/arms seller compound that is heavily fortified. Well, the NOTES says to "Kill everybody at the compound", which I did, and still no EVAC objective. You have one room with 2 officers (Taki, American) and a Warlord. If I rush the room, close in on one I get "Order your men to surrender". So I choose the Taki officer. He killed the other two. I killed EVERYBODY on the MAP, period. Not sure if the WARLORD is the Prez or not, but I killed every body on the entire map, period. Also, the CODES section was a bit childish and could have been left out. I think maybe a 15 year old kid would have done that, so I am assuming you are younger than 18? Who is the PREZ and what does he look like? Where is he exactly? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
texkaz 33 Posted August 12, 2012 (edited) The Code section? I dont know I guess I was trying to imitate a Putin ordering a hit on a guy. I'm actually 26, I guess I was just trying to be funny and it came off wrong =/. I didn't like it too much myself but thought it would appeal to a younger crowd. Order your men to surrender? I don't know where that came from. Could be the surrender module I used I thought that module just made some guys hands go up...huh. Yes the warlord is the President. I was looking for a Hamid-Karzai look-alike addon but I did not really find one maybe undercover Graves would be better. I needed something that tells they player "Hey I am a real official Head of State...but I'm not Western." I figure to make Takistani President look like some European bureaucrat wouldn't be authentic (originally he was a chernarus functionary in black suit until I made that last-second change). Evac is moving back to the airport near the control tower. You did not that? Killing the President should activate that trigger where you go back to the airport. If that is not the case that is a functional problem with the mission I need to fix. If you didn't take down the tower you would have had some things to take care of. That is why killing him would not have been the end of the fight. Thank you for your review. I will defiantly take your most constructive criticism into account when I revamp this mission for the campaign. Yeah it is cliche I agree but that's because it is inspired after Operation Shturm 333 when KGB killed Hafizullah Amin in the Presidential Palace. You'd expect a President to be pretty well protected. What's not cliche about the mission is that it is the first mission in the campaign and the campaign is about dealing with the aftermath of this assassination, instead of the assassination being the "WE GOT HITLER!" climatic moment like it was Operation Arrowhead. It will feature a lot of blood and guts front line combat and "seemingly" long patrols to even one type of mission not really done before...or at least not often. Edited August 13, 2012 by TexKaz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kommiekat 12 Posted August 13, 2012 The Code section? Order your men to surrender? Evac is moving back to the airport near the control tower. Thank you for your review. You're doing a great job! It was lots of fun. First part was instant action and caught me off guard. I was only suggesting you change that CODE part in the briefing to make it look a bit more mature and authentic. It's your mission, man. You can do as you wish. I think you now understand the bug. It's some sort of surrender bug. Even after killing them, I can still select them with the Action command. They will stand up, move a bit, then fall back down. The Evac never triggered, even though I drove all the way back to that point. Looking forward to the CAMP! Hope it's before summer ends. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
